This poem reflects on love, loss, and self-respect. It shows the wisdom of recognizing people’s true selves, accepting their choices, and not allowing betrayal to harden one’s heart.
At its core, the poem reminds us that kindness in times of hurt is not weakness—it is strength.
# My Eyes Know #
My eyes and my soul
still speak in silence.
They remember names
my lips no longer mention,
faces that promised forever
and vanished like passing seasons.
My eyes know the truth.
They saw the hesitation,
the unspoken goodbyes,
the love that slowly
turned its back
and walked away.
Dear heart,
stop building homes
in places where you cannot stay.
Some people betray,
some people leave,
but let their choices
belong to them.
You never learned
to hurt others
while healing yourself.
That is not weakness.
That is your strength.
(Vijay Verma)
www.retiredkalam.com
Categories: kavita
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very nice .
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Thank you so much.
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What a profoundly moving and soul-stirring piece, Verma ji.
The way you’ve woven restraint into every line—especially the haunting refrain, “My eyes know the truth”—carries such quiet power. The imagery of lips that no longer mention names, yet the soul that still remembers, captures that bittersweet space between memory and moving on with breathtaking delicacy.
Your closing verses are nothing short of a mantra for the tender-hearted. The reminder that choosing not to wound others while nursing your own wounds isn’t naivety, but immense fortitude, is a lesson the world desperately needs to hear. It takes remarkable grace to let betrayers keep their choices and still refuse to let bitterness take root.
Thank you for this exquisite reminder that the softest hearts often hold the strongest steel. 🙏
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Thank you so much for your incredibly thoughtful and heartfelt words. 🙏💖
I’m deeply touched that you connected so profoundly with the poem and its unspoken emotions. Your beautiful interpretation of “My eyes know the truth” and the quiet strength behind choosing compassion over bitterness truly resonated with me.
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Many of life’s greatest breakthroughs begin when we shift our focus beyond ourselves and choose to contribute to something bigger. A purpose driven mindset creates stronger relationships, deeper fulfillment, and a lasting impact that extends far beyond personal success or individual achievement.
True wisdom often comes from recognizing that personal growth and service can exist together. When we invest our time, energy, and compassion into helping others, we discover new perspectives that enrich our own lives while creating meaningful change within our communities.
The most influential people are rarely remembered for what they accumulated alone. They are remembered for the lives they touched, the opportunities they created, and the kindness they extended without expecting anything in return. Lasting significance is built through generosity and genuine care.
Every day presents a chance to think beyond immediate concerns and contribute to a greater purpose. By choosing empathy, compassion, and service, we create a legacy that inspires others and reminds us that our greatest achievements are often measured by the difference we make
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Beautifully said. 🙏💚
I completely agree that life’s true meaning is found not only in personal success but in the positive difference we make in the lives of others.
Wealth and achievements may fade with time, but kindness, compassion, and selfless service leave footprints that endure for generations.
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A deeply meaningful reflection. Love, loss, and self-respect are powerful teachers in life. Your words beautifully highlight the importance of acceptance, wisdom, and honoring our own worth.
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful and encouraging words. 🙏💖
I’m truly grateful that you connected with the deeper message of the poem. I believe that love, loss, and self-respect are indeed some of life’s greatest teachers, shaping us with lessons that time alone cannot provide.
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Beautifully written. A touching reminder that true strength lies in choosing kindness without losing self-respect. Healing with compassion is the greatest courage. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank you so much for your beautiful and thoughtful reflection. 🙏💖
I’m truly touched that the poem resonated with you. I completely agree—choosing kindness while preserving one’s self-respect is one of life’s greatest strengths, and healing with compassion is indeed a quiet form of courage.
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Beautiful my dear 🙏
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Thank you so much, my dear, for your kind and affectionate words. 🙏💖
Your appreciation truly warms my heart and encourages me to keep writing. I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
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Please do not stop writting, you have an natural gifth 💯🙏🌹
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Thank you so much for your heartfelt encouragement. 🙏💖
Your kind words truly mean a lot to me. I’ll certainly keep writing as long as my thoughts and experiences have something meaningful to share. Knowing that my words resonate with readers like you is one of my greatest inspirations.
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Oh now i am the one you is gratefull for your kind words 🌹🙏 thank you my dear 🙏
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I have read your introduction. What a beautiful introduction, Carla. 🌸 Your love for your family, your warrior spirit, and your compassionate heart shine through every word.
I admire your desire to use your writing and life experiences to uplift and inspire others. Wishing you continued strength, joy, and success as your words touch many hearts. 💖✍️
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Thank You my dear,again 🌹 i am gratefull for reading my introduction and enjoying it 🙏🌻 it means a lot to me my dear friend 🫶
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You’re most welcome, my dear friend. 🙏🌹
It was truly my pleasure to read your introduction. Your sincerity, warmth, and compassionate spirit shine through your words, making them a joy to read. I’m grateful to have connected with your writing, and I look forward to reading more of your heartfelt posts.
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Thank you a thousand times my dear friend 🙏🌻 much love for you and your family 🤗
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Thank you so much, my dear friend! 🙏🌻
Your heartfelt kindness and warm wishes mean a great deal to me. Sending my sincere gratitude, love, and best wishes to you and your family as well.
May your days be filled with good health, happiness, peace, and countless blessings. Take care and stay blessed! 🤗
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💕🍀🙏💟❤️🫶
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Good morning, friends,
Have a nice day.💕
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Very reflective poem 😊
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Thank you so much! 😊🙏
I’m truly happy that you found the poem reflective. It was written from the heart, inspired by those quiet moments of introspection that life often brings. Your kind words and appreciation mean a great deal to me.
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This is so beautifully written Verma ji. The line “stop building homes in places where you cannot stay” touched my heart, and the ending is a powerful reminder that choosing kindness after being hurt is one of the greatest strengths we can possess. Simply beautiful. 💙🦋✨
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Thank you so much for your heartfelt and beautiful words. 🙏💙
I’m truly touched that those lines resonated with you. “Stop building homes in places where you cannot stay” is a reminder I believe many of us need at different stages of life. Your understanding of the poem’s message about choosing kindness without surrendering self-respect means a great deal to me.
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