
A quiet morning walk in the rain becomes an unexpected journey inward, reminding us that life is not always about moving faster or reaching farther. Sometimes, the greatest discovery is simply learning to pause, notice, and recognise ourselves again.
Time never pauses—
yet sometimes,
it slows enough
for a listening heart.
Walking Beside Time
This morning was different,
because
I did not walk alone.
The rain held my hand,
the breeze whispered
forgotten songs,
and Time—
old, patient Time—
matched my quiet steps.
The sky wore
a robe of silver clouds,
while trembling leaves
offered tiny prayers
to the waiting earth.
Each raindrop
became a memory,
each breath
a quiet thanksgiving.
For once,
I was not counting steps,
measuring distance,
or wondering
how much farther I had to go.
I was simply walking.
And somewhere
between the whispering trees
and the rhythm of rain,
I began to hear
a quieter voice—
my own.
I realized
how often I had hurried
through beautiful mornings,
how many sunsets
I had watched
without truly seeing,
how many moments
I had postponed
for a tomorrow
that never promised to come.
Perhaps life
was never asking me
to run faster.
Perhaps
it was asking me
to notice.
The rain slowed.
The breeze softened.
A few drops
trembled on a leaf
before surrendering
to the earth.
I stood still
and watched them fall.
And in that small moment,
I understood—
we do not always need
a new destination.
Sometimes,
we simply need
to be present
where our feet already are.
So I walked on,
not to conquer the road,
not to outrun Time,
but to discover
the quiet person
waiting within me.
And for the first time,
I did not feel
that Time was leaving me behind.
It was walking beside me—
slowly,
silently,
like an old friend
who had been waiting
to recognise me again.
(Vijay Verma)
www.retiredkalam.com

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Pranam Verma ji, this is not just a poem—it is a gentle prayer for the hurried soul. The way you let the rain hold your hand and Time walk beside you is so beautiful and profound. Lines like “Perhaps life was never asking me to run faster. Perhaps it was asking me to notice” touched me deeply. Thank you for this soulful reminder to slow down, breathe, and meet ourselves again. A truly beautiful piece. 🙏🌧️
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Pranam 🙏 Thank you so much for reading the poem with such depth and sensitivity. Your words beautifully capture what I wished to convey—that sometimes, in our hurry to reach somewhere, we forget to simply be present where we are. If the rain, the words, and the silence could touch your heart and invite you to pause for a moment, then the poem has truly found its purpose. 🌧️❤️
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I like the blend of images and poetry! Very fitting!
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Thank you so much! 😊 I’m glad you enjoyed the blend of images and poetry. I believe when words and visuals come together, they can create a deeper emotional connection and make the message more memorable. Your appreciation truly encourages me to keep creating. 🙏🌷
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very nice .
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Thank you so much.
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A peaceful reminder that true wellness starts within—slowing down, breathing deeply, and connecting with the quiet moments is often the best medicine for the mind and body! 🌧️🌿✨
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Thank you so much for this beautiful reflection. 🙏🌿 You have expressed the essence of the message so beautifully. In our busy lives, we often forget that slowing down is not stopping—it is giving ourselves space to breathe, listen, and reconnect with what truly matters.
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I tried walking in the rain after decades of avoiding it. It wasn’t nearly as bad as I remembered.
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That’s wonderful! 😊 Sometimes the things we avoid for years turn out to be far less intimidating when we finally give them another chance. There’s something wonderfully freeing about walking in the rain—feeling the drops, hearing the rhythm, and simply enjoying the moment.
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A great reminder.. love your poem.. xx
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Thank you so much for your kind words! 😊❤️ I’m delighted that you enjoyed the poem. Your appreciation truly means a lot to me and encourages me to keep putting my thoughts and feelings into words. Keep smiling and stay blessed! 🌷🙏
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You’re most welcome, always!!!
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Thank you so much! 😊 Your kindness and warm words are always appreciated. It’s a pleasure to share thoughts and experiences with such wonderful conversations. Stay happy, keep smiling, and keep inspiring! 🙏🌷
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A beautiful meditation on presence and self-discovery. Sometimes we don’t need to outrun time we simply need to walk with it, quietly enough to hear ourselves again.
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Thank you so much for this beautiful reflection. 🙏🌿 I love the thought of “walking with time” rather than constantly trying to outrun it. Perhaps when we slow down, we finally create the silence needed to hear our own hearts and understand ourselves a little better
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One of the conundrum with many of the pleasurable things in life, such as walking, running, intimacy, etc.
For many of the reward is getting done.
I believe there’s a metaphor in your comparison that you use for life.
Enjoy the journey along the way.
I was a bit like this today on my run, I got a bit frustrated with a pet someone who thinks cars have the right away in every situation. I didn’t bother hurling obscenity., that’s not my style, and decided I wanted to look at the sea.
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Thank you for sharing this—it beautifully captures the metaphor behind the post. Sometimes we become so focused on reaching the finish line that we forget to experience the journey itself.
And I love that you chose to look at the sea instead of losing your temper. 😊 That small choice says a lot: we may not control other people’s behaviour, but we can choose where we place our attention. The sea was probably a much better companion than an argument!
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Lovely post “we do not always need
a new destination”. oh I should walk on with my phd and fear nothing.
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Thank you so much! 🙏🌷 And yes—keep walking with your PhD journey, one step at a time, without letting fear become a roadblock. Sometimes we don’t need a new destination; we simply need courage to continue on the path we have chosen. Wishing you confidence, patience, and joy throughout the journey!
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A good walk is seldom about the weather, it is more often about the wither and the whether. Walking in softly falling rain or snow can allow for some good contemplation. Happy Tuesday. Allan
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So beautifully expressed, Allan! A walk is indeed much more than the weather—it is about the whether and the wither, the questions we carry and the thoughts we leave behind. A gentle walk in the rain or snow can turn into a quiet conversation with oneself. Wishing you a thoughtful, peaceful, and happy Tuesday!
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