# You Still Walk With Me #

This poem reflects on the enduring memory of a loved one who is no longer present yet remains in our thoughts and daily lives.

It highlights the emotional mix of absence and presence—showing that love doesn’t disappear but changes into a quiet reminder that accompanies us in every moment.

You Still Walk With Me

Though you are not here,
you never truly left.
You live in the quiet spaces
between one thought and the next.

I find you in places
where there is smoke, not fire—
in old memories
pretending to be something new,
in silence that suddenly learns
how to call your name.

You are not near, not far,
just somewhere I cannot reach,
Yet never stop your feelings.

Like rain that falls without touch,
like wind that passes without sound,
you remain
in a way, absence never learns to explain.

Sometimes I think you are a dream
that forgot how to end,
or a truth
I was never ready to hold completely.

And still, every path I take
softly bends toward you,
as if even distance
remembers where you belong.

So I stay here—
not waiting, not moving on,
just walking with the echo of you,
where even time feels your name.

(Vijay Verma)
www.retiredkalam.com



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24 replies

  1. As long as our loved ones remain in our memories, they are never truly gone. A good tribute from those who remain and all those who have departed could ever wish for. Have a great day. Allan

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    • Thank you so much, Allan. Your words are truly comforting and beautifully said. 🙏

      I believe memories keep our loved ones alive within us, quietly guiding and warming our hearts through time. Wishing you a peaceful and wonderful day as well. 🌿✨

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  2. Kya baat hai, this is such a beautiful and deeply soulful reflection on enduring memory—it genuinely hits home.

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  3. A poignant tribute to the soft whispers of presence that stir our souls when the physical body of a loved one has passed on.

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    • Thank you for such beautifully thoughtful words. 🙏 Love has a quiet way of remaining present, even beyond physical absence—through memories, feelings, and those gentle whispers that still touch the soul. 🌿✨

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  4. My father died when I was twelve and this poem truly reflects how loved ones are always beside us.

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    • Thank you for sharing something so personal. 🙏 Losing a father at such a young age leaves a space that never truly disappears, but love has a way of staying beside us through memories, guidance, and quiet moments of feeling connected. I’m deeply touched that the poem resonated with your heart. 🌿✨

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  5. What a beautiful and deeply touching poem, Verma ji. You’ve captured the bittersweet essence of love and loss with such gentle precision—the way someone can be absent yet still woven into the quiet fabric of everyday life. Lines like “the silence that suddenly learns how to call your name” and “every path I take softly bends toward you” stay with the reader long after the poem ends. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt piece. 🙏

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    • Thank you so much for such a heartfelt and thoughtful response. 🙏 It truly means a lot that those lines stayed with you. Sometimes love and loss continue living quietly within the smallest moments, and I simply tried to give those feelings a voice. Grateful that the poem resonated so deeply with your heart. 🌿✨

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  6. I want to live in the quiet spaces
    between one thought and the next.

    Exquisite

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  7. very nice .

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  8. A deeply moving reflection—beautifully expressing how love and memory continue to keep someone present in the heart, even through physical absence. 🕊️✨

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    • Thank you for such a heartfelt reflection. 🕊️✨
      You expressed the emotion so beautifully. Some people may no longer walk beside us physically, yet their presence continues to live quietly within our hearts through love, memories, and unspoken feelings. Your words truly touched me.

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  9. Vermavkvさん、おはようございます。いつも有難うございます🙇‍♂️
    あなたがいなくても、本当に去ってはいませんでした。あなたは思考との静かな空間に生きています😉
    古い記憶が新しい何かを装って、静寂の中、突然あなたの名前を呼びます🤗そのあなたは、近くにも遠くにもいないのに…
    しかしそれは私が届かないどこかにいるだけなのです。感情を止めることもなく、触れられず降る雨と同じに、音もなく通り過ぎる風のように、あなたはある意味では存在しています😉私が歩む道はどこかであなたの方へと向いています☺️愛した人の存在は、歳月を経ても不変です。いや、むしろ一層その思いが強くなるのかもしれません。

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    • Good morning ☀️
      Thank you always for your beautiful words and kind thoughts. Your message touched me deeply.

      Even when people are far away, their presence never truly disappears. Some souls continue to live quietly within our memories, like soft rain or a silent passing breeze.

      I believe some bonds only grow stronger with time, and the people we truly love remain part of our journey forever. Your heartfelt thoughts mean a lot to me 😊

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  10. This poem reminds me of nostalgia. Beautiful work Verma!

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