
Sometimes love doesn’t arrive with noise or certainty—it unfolds quietly, in the spaces where we feel most seen.
The poem explores that gentle transformation: the comfort of being understood, the rediscovery of self, and the subtle shift from wanting to be loved to wanting to care just as deeply in return.
# The Way You See Me #
It wasn’t a moment—
no thunder,
just a quiet surprise.
Yes, a slow unfolding,
like dawn
learning how to touch the sky.
You arrived gently
into the corners of my days,
and somehow
changed something in me.
I don’t remember
when I started waiting
for your voice—your words—
as if they carried light,
or when your simple presence
became a place
I could finally rest.
All I know is—
somewhere between your words
and my silences,
I began to feel…
less alone inside myself.
You don’t love me loudly.
You don’t have to.
It’s in the way you stay—
in conversations that wander,
in pauses that don’t feel empty,
in the quiet certainty
that I don’t need to perform.
And maybe that’s what undid me—
not you,
but who I become
when I am seen by you.
Softer.
Braver.
A version of myself
I had almost given up on.
But then—
there’s this other truth
I can’t ignore:
the way your smile
feels like something fragile
I want to protect,
the way your happiness
suddenly feels
like it has something to do with me.
(Vijay Verma)
www.retiredkalam.com

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Verma ji, this is breathtaking. You’ve captured that quiet, transformative power of being truly seen—the kind of love that doesn’t demand but simply allows. The line “who I become when I am seen by you” stayed with me. Thank you for this.🌷🤝
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Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful words—they truly mean a lot to me. I’m really glad that line resonated with you; it came from a very quiet, honest place within.
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very nice
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Thank you so much.
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Well said. Love is not just any one thing or just one moment. It is more than a feeling, it is an environment of always thinking of the other first. Happy Thursday. Allan
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Beautifully said, Allan.
Love truly isn’t a single moment—it’s a quiet, constant presence, a space where care and thoughtfulness live without effort. When we begin to place another’s well-being alongside our own, it becomes something deeper than emotion—it becomes a way of being.
Wishing you a peaceful and heartful Thursday 🌿
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Wow
What beautiful words
So simple
And Yet so deep
Reaching the inner depths of me
Much 13Love & 13Peace
Sincerely,
NagaSymha 13Bey
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Thank you, NagaSymha.
Your words carry the same depth and quiet energy—they truly touched me.
If the poem could reach even a small corner within you, then it has found its purpose.
Much love and peace back to you—always. 🌿
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And that’s the beauty of life
Watching ourselves unfold like a lotus flower or rose
Your a very good spirit thank you so much for me you
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Correction “ thank you so much for you being you!”
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Thank you so much for saying that—it truly warms my heart! 😊
Your words are a beautiful reminder that authenticity and kindness are what make connections meaningful. Grateful for your thoughtfulness and for simply being you as well! 🌷
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Thank you so much for your kind and heartfelt words! 🌸
I love the imagery you shared—life truly is a beautiful unfolding, and your message reflects such warmth and positivity. Grateful for your spirit and for simply being you as well! ✨
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Thank you so much for saying that—it truly warms my heart!
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This poem beautifully describes that feeling of yearning for love but not searching for it. Then, like a plot twist in a riveting story, love appears and changes your life. Wonderful as always Verma!
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Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful words.
You’ve captured it beautifully—the quiet yearning that doesn’t chase, and then that unexpected moment when love simply arrives, almost like it always knew the way.
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Vermavkvさん、こんばんは。いつも有難うございます🙇♂️
「夜明けが空に触れることを学ぶような。あなたは私の日々の片隅に優しく
現れ、なぜか私の中の何かを変えてくれた。
あなたの声――あなたの言葉――を待ち始めたのも、まるで光を運んでいるかのように、あなたのただの存在が私がようやく安らげる場所になったのもいつかは覚えていない」
この語りは、もう遠くなった思い出を昨日のように呼び起こしてくれます。辛い過去に確かな光をさしてくれたのです🤗その言葉も、声もが光を運んでくれました。あなたが安らぎの場所になったことです😉そして確実に自身を変えてくれたのです。感慨深い詩を有難うございます🙇♂️
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Good morning, and thank you so much for your beautiful and heartfelt message. 🙏
I’m truly touched to hear that the words resonated with you and brought back memories with such clarity and warmth. It means a lot to know that something I wrote could reflect a light in your past and offer even a small sense of peace.
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Beautiful Vijay
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Thank you so much for your kind words—it truly means a lot to me. 😊
I’m really glad the poem resonated with you. Moments like these make writing even more meaningful.
Grateful for your appreciation and encouragement! 🌷
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Most beautiful and meaningful verses. Congratulations Sir on a most enchanting poem. All the best, and may your day be filled with creativity, happiness and peace.
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Thank you so much Sir.
I’m truly grateful that the poem resonated with you.
Your wishes mean a lot—may your day too be filled with peace, joy, and beautiful moments of inspiration.
Warm regards 🙏
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Always a pleasure Sir!
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The pleasure is truly mine. 🙏
Your kind words and gracious presence always add warmth to the conversation.
Looking forward to many more such thoughtful and enriching exchanges ahead. 🌸
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