
This is a poem that celebrates new beginnings. It reflects gratitude for waking up, finding hope after weariness, and embracing each day as a fresh chance to live, smile, and try again.
# Good Morning, Life #
Morning comes with gentle feet,
Soft light spills across the street.
The night is gone—now feels like fun,
I walk and greet the rising sun.
Morning says, “You made it through.
See? The sky is turning blue.”
Even pain must rest awhile
When the day begins to smile.
Birds wake up and start to sing,
Small hearts trusting everything.
In their songs, so pure and true,
Life feels possible again, too.
I was tired. I was worn.
Still, you came—another morn.
You did not ask who I had been,
You simply said, “Smile again.”
O, dear Morning, hear me say,
I love you more in every way.
You give this gift, so clear, so true:
A chance to try. A chance to live.
So I rise—not strong, but here,
Holding hope instead of fear.
Good morning, life—I softly say,
Thank you for this brand-new day.
(Vijay Verma)
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very nice .
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Thank you so much.
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Dear Verma ji, Good morning 🙏
This poem carries a quiet warmth that feels deeply human. Its gentle gratitude, free of drama or urgency, turns morning into an act of mercy rather than momentum.
By honoring weariness without being ruled by it, the poem reminds us that hope does not arrive loudly, it simply arrives, faithful and new.
-Vijay Srivastava
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Thank you so much, Srikanth. Your words met the poem with the same care and attention that inspired it in the first place. I’m deeply touched by how you named that “quiet, profound growth”—that’s exactly the soil the poem was hoping to rest in.
I love how you describe the tree’s currency as time, courage, and faith. That reflection feels like a continuation of the poem rather than a response to it, and I’m grateful for that shared understanding. May the year ahead offer you the same—steady roots, patient tending, and moments where growth reveals itself softly, almost without asking.
With warmth and gratitude,
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Excellent poem, with beautiful rhyme and rhythm!
I can relate to the thoughts, as I wish you a very Good morning, with new hopes for a new beginning.
So thoughtful of you to include the elements of Mother Nature in the poem.
Nature is the ultimate inspiration and it fills us with hope and belief, each morning.
Thank you for sharing. ☀️
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Thank you so much for this warm and thoughtful response. I’m truly glad the rhythm and feelings resonated with you. Your words about morning, hope, and new beginnings capture the spirit I hoped to convey.
Nature really is the quiet teacher—steadily reminding us to begin again, to trust cycles, and to carry belief into each new day. I’m grateful you felt that presence in the poem.
Wishing you a beautiful morning filled with calm, inspiration, and gentle hope. ☀️
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A beautiful and heartfelt poem, Verma ji. It truly captures the gentle miracle of a new dawn. The lines “You did not ask who I had been, / You simply said, ‘Smile again.’” are especially profound—they speak to the non-judgmental, forgiving grace that each morning offers. Your words are a soothing reminder to greet each day not with the weight of yesterday, but with gratitude for a fresh beginning. Thank you for sharing this lovely, hopeful piece. It has brightened my day.
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Thank you so much for these generous and deeply thoughtful words. I’m truly moved by how beautifully you connected with the spirit of the poem. You captured exactly what I hoped those lines would convey—the quiet, forgiving grace that each new morning offers us without questions or conditions.
Knowing that the poem brought a sense of light and calm to your day means more to me than I can easily express. Your reflection adds another layer of warmth to the piece, and I’m grateful you took the time to share it.
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Lovely, and an honest reflection of reality.
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Thank you so much.
Your words mean a lot to me.
I’m glad it resonated and felt true to life—that honesty was exactly what I hoped to convey.
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i a world that is lacking hope this makes you wake up early and tackle the new day.
Well done
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Thank you so much. Your words really resonate with me. If something I shared can spark even a small sense of hope or motivation to face a new day, then it has done its job. In times when hope feels scarce, choosing to rise and engage with the day is itself an act of quiet courage. I truly appreciate your encouragement. 🌱
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Congratulations Sir on this beautiful poem! Optimism, gratitude and the knowledge of good things constitute the recipe for a meaningful and happy life!
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Thank you very much for your kind and generous words. I’m truly grateful that the poem resonated with you.
You’re absolutely right—optimism, gratitude, and an awareness of the good around us are powerful ingredients for a meaningful and fulfilling life. Your appreciation is deeply encouraging. 🌼
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You’re very welcome and it is always a pleasure to read and learn from your poetry. Wishing you enjoy a truly blessed day!
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Thank you so much for your kind and generous words. They truly mean a lot to me. I’m grateful that the poetry resonates with you, and I wish you a day filled with peace, inspiration, and many small blessings as well. 🌿✨
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Thank you so much my friend. Hope you have a day just as blessed. What is your assignment today?
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Thank you, Sir.
that’s very kind of you. 🙏
My “assignment” today is my favorite, My painting .
I hope your day unfolds gently and brings you something meaningful too. 🌿
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Thank you!
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Such a beautiful poem, your poem deeply touched my heart and brought heartfelt tears to my eyes 🥹 thank you 💗
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Thank you so much for sharing this. It truly means a lot to know the poem touched your heart so deeply. 🥹💗
If the words found their way to your tears, then they found their purpose. I’m grateful you felt it and took the time to tell me. Wishing you warmth, comfort, and gentle moments today.
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A beautiful poem that deeply touched my heart and brought heartfelt tears to my eyes, thank you! 🥹💗
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Thank you so much for sharing this. It truly means a lot to know the poem touched your heart so deeply. 🥹💗
If the words found their way to your tears, then they found their purpose. I’m grateful you felt it and took the time to tell me. Wishing you warmth, comfort, and gentle moments today.
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This is a beautiful and inspiring poem about finding hope and gratitude in new beginnings. The lines about the day giving a fresh chance to live and smile really resonated with me.
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