
This is a powerful journey from darkness to self-liberation. It speaks of breaking the chains of fear and reclaiming inner strength.
Through pain, courage is born — and the poem celebrates that quiet, radiant moment when the soul chooses freedom over fear.
# Finally Free #
They held me close with hands unseen,
Their whispers cold, their claws unclean.
They bound my heart, they tied my will,
They taught me silence — to stay still..
I lived in fear — a whispered plea,
A captive to what haunted me.
Their voices echoed, sharp and near,
They fed my heart with doubt and fear.
But the fire was born within my chest,
A spark that would not be suppressed.
No ropes, no chains, no shadowed cry,
Could cage the soul that learns to fly.
The chains they forged began to break,
Each link is undone for my own sake.
Their claws fell back, their power died,
As courage bloomed where tears had dried.
Now I stand tall — the night is gone,
The dawn within keeps shining on.
No longer bound by what I see,
I am my truth — I’m finally free.
(Vijay Verma)
www.retiredkalam.com

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What a beautiful poem about the absolute necessity of freedom!
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I’m truly glad the poem resonated with you. Freedom is indeed one of the deepest human needs, and it means a lot to know the message touched your heart. I sincerely appreciate your appreciation and encouragement.
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Beautifully written, sir. 👏
Thank you for sharing..
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Thank you so much for your kind words.
I truly appreciate your encouragement and support.
It means a lot to know the poem resonated with you. Grateful for your appreciation—thank you once again!
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Always a pleasure. Have a wonderful weekend. 😊
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Thank you so much!
It’s always wonderful hearing from you as well. Wishing you a truly relaxing and joyful weekend ahead. Take care and enjoy every moment! 😊
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Muhteşem 🌿
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Çok teşekkür ederim! 🌿
Beğenmenize gerçekten çok sevindim.
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*Such a powerful and deeply moving journey!** Your words beautifully capture the shift from darkness to inner liberation. 🌑➡️🌅 The way you describe breaking invisible chains and choosing courage over fear is truly inspiring. 💪💫 This poem reflects that sacred moment when the soul rises and claims its freedom. 🕊️❤️
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Thank you so much for your heartfelt reflection.
I’m truly touched by the way you connected with the poem. Your words capture its essence so beautifully—the struggle, the breaking of inner chains, and the quiet awakening of courage.
I deeply appreciate your sensitivity and the warmth of your encouragement. It means a great deal to me. Thank you once again for reading with such an open heart.
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This is a most beautifully written poem, powerful and evocative. I find it truly inspiring. The quest for freedom should never be abandoned.
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Thank you so much for your heartfelt words.
I truly appreciate your thoughtful reflection and the encouragement it carries. The journey toward freedom is indeed timeless and essential, and I’m glad the poem was able to convey that spirit in a meaningful way.
Your appreciation means a great deal—thank you once again for your kindness and insight.
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It is always a pleasure, Sir, to read your beautiful, inspiring and uplifting poetry which is a message in beauty and in positive values. All the best to you and may you enjoy a lovely evening of relaxation and entertainment.
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Thank you so much for your deeply kind words.
It truly means a great deal to know that my poetry resonates with you in such a positive and uplifting way.
Your appreciation and encouragement are always a source of motivation. Wishing you a peaceful, joy-filled evening as well, filled with rest, warmth, and everything that brings you comfort. All the very best to you!
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Thank you!
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You are welcome, Sir.
How is your day ?
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Had a travelling (by automobile) day Sir, a rather long trip but enjoyed a beautiful scenery and a new city!
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That sounds wonderful! Long road trips can be tiring, but they also have a special charm—new landscapes, fresh perspectives, and the quiet joy of watching the world unfold through the window.
I’m glad you enjoyed the scenery and had the chance to explore a new city.
Those experiences always stay with us. Hope you’re feeling relaxed after the journey!
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Thank you! And you are so right Sir! Today I am exploring the city I am visiting g called Logroño in the north of Spain.
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That sounds wonderful! Logroño is a beautiful city, rich with culture, warmth, and incredible food. I’m so glad you’re taking time to explore and soak in its charm. Enjoy every moment of your journey, Sir—may the streets, the sights, and the people bring you joy and inspiration. Safe travels and happy exploring!
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Yea, you are so right Sir! A beautiful city and great food and of course great wine!
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Yes indeed! It’s wonderful to hear you’re enjoying the beauty of the city—its culture,
its flavours, and of course the wine! Savor every moment of your trip.
Wishing you many more delightful experiences ahead. Take care and enjoy to the fullest!”
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Thank you! 🙏🏻
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You are most welcome, Sir.
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That sounds wonderful, Sir ,
I hope Logroño is a beautiful city with so much charm, rich history, and incredible food.
I’m glad you’re taking the time to explore it and soak in its atmosphere.
Enjoy every moment of your visit, Sir — may the city greet you with warmth, good experiences,
and memorable sights. Safe wanderings and happy discoveries! 🌆✨
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Thanks so much Sir!
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Good morning, Sir.
I am on morning walk track.
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That sounds wonderful! Logroño is such a charming city, rich with history, culture, and incredible flavors.
I’m sure its streets, architecture, and atmosphere will offer you a beautiful and memorable experience.
Enjoy every moment of your exploration, and may this journey fill your day with joy and inspiration.
Safe travels and happy discovering!”
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very nice .
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Thank you so much.
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Very powerfully and moving
The soul is set free from evil bondage
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Absolutely! It’s truly uplifting to witness the soul’s liberation and the light that follows when we break free from all that binds us. 🌟
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Your poem is relatable, Vijay. It takes courage to move beyond our fears.
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Thank you so much for saying that! Your words truly mean a lot. 🌼
Yes, stepping beyond our fears is never easy, but when someone relates to the emotion behind the poem, it feels incredibly encouraging. I’m grateful for your thoughtful reflection and support. 🙏✨
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