This is a reflective poem about hope, resilience, and the enduring light within every soul.
It reminds us to embrace life’s moments, navigate challenges with grace, and let kindness guide our journey.
Whisper of the Dawn
In the quiet of the morning light,
Dreams awaken from the night.
Hope whispers softly, pure and true,
A gentle path unfolds for you.
The world may rush, the winds may roar,
Yet hearts can sail to distant shore.
Through joy, through pain, through tears we see,
Life’s endless song of what can be.
So hold each moment, cherish the day,
Let kindness gently guide your way.
For every soul, both near and far,
Shines brightly with its own star.
(Vijay Verma)
www.retiredkalam.com
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I love the poem and the painting.
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I’m so glad you enjoyed them!
It’s amazing how words and colors can come together to spark such warmth and meaning.
Thank you for sharing your appreciation — it makes the art feel even more alive.
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I am really drawn in by your painting. It’s certainly caught my eye.
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I’m delighted it spoke to you! That’s exactly what I hope for — that someone connects with the piece in their own way.
Thank you for taking a moment to share how it resonated with you.
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You’re welcome. 😊
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😊 Your kindness means a lot — thank you for taking the time to share such warm words. I truly appreciate your support!
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This is absolutely stunning. It feels like a quiet benediction for the soul. The way it contrasts the “roar” of the world with the “whisper” of hope is so powerful and true. It’s a gentle yet profound reminder that our resilience isn’t about loud battles, but about listening to that inner light and navigating with grace. Thank you for sharing this—it’s a true balm for the spirit and a beautiful compass for the heart.
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That’s such a beautifully thoughtful response — thank you for seeing the heart behind the words. I love how you described it as a “quiet benediction,” because that’s exactly the feeling I hoped it might evoke: a reminder that strength can be tender, and hope often arrives in a whisper. I’m so glad it resonated with you in that way.
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very nice .
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Thank you so much.
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Beautiful poem!
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I’m so glad you liked it. 😊
Your kind words mean a lot — this poem is special because it speaks of love that stays alive in memory.
Thank you for appreciating its essence and for sharing such warmth. 🌸✨
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This is such a beautiful and hopeful poem spreading joy throughout. Your words radiate the depth of your heart which I experience like a vibrant starburst soaring through the midnight sky.
I am glad you have an outlet to express yourself so we can breathe the same fresh wonders which you generously share with us.
Thank you, Friend!
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That’s such a heart-warming message — thank you, my dear friend! 🌟
I’m truly touched by your beautiful imagery and the kindness in your words.
Knowing that my thoughts can bring a little light and wonder to someone else makes writing even more meaningful.
I’m grateful for your presence and encouragement — it inspires me to keep sharing from the heart. 💫
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Someone needs to perform an exorcism upon Tucker Carlson. And perhaps burn the UN at the stake for
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😊😊
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A very beautiful poem about hope and optimism, always, no matter the difficulties and disappointments. Thank you very much, my dear brother, for your inspiring good words 🙏 May God bless you and your family always. 😇 🙏 💕 🌹 👍 🙏
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Thank you, dear brother, for your warm and heartfelt words. I am truly grateful for your blessings and encouragement.
May God bless you and your family abundantly as well, and may hope and optimism always light your path through every challenge.
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Amen 🙏 Best wishes and prayers for you and your loved ones always 🙏 Thank you so much my esteemed brother 🙏 Be happy and blessed always 😇 🙏 💕 🌹 👍 🙏
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Thank you for such beautiful wishes 🙏
Sending the same blessings back to you and your family — may you always stay happy and blessed. 💕😇
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Such a beautifully tender poem! 🌅✨ *Whisper of the Dawn* radiates hope and resilience, reminding us that even in life’s darkest moments, there’s always a light guiding us forward. Truly uplifting and inspiring. 💖🌟
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Thank you so much for your kind and encouraging words! 🌸✨
I’m so glad Whisper of the Dawn touched you that way —
it was written with the very hope of bringing light and comfort.
Your appreciation truly means a lot and inspires me to keep creating. 💫💖
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