
This touching poem shows feelings of longing, love, and separation. It describes the wait of a person longing for reunion, even when obstacles arise.
Through images of fading lights, moonlit nights, and rainy days, the verses convey a heartfelt message—where love holds strong, and hope remains for a future meeting.
When the Paths Don’t Meet
The roads to our meeting no longer appear,
Yet your thoughts never leave me, my dear.
In every moment, a secret of you hides,
Why won’t you tell the tale my heart confides?
I will come to you, there is no doubt,
In your dreams, I’ll be wandering about.
Even if the world turns against my name,
Without you, life can never be the same.
Extinguish the lamps, let the light fade away,
Bid the moonlight a gentle goodbye today.
The bounds of my waiting have long been broken,
Now bless me with prayers, softly spoken.
Come to me in the arms of solitude’s night,
In these lonely rains where heartbeats take flight.
I can no longer trust my own heart’s call—
Let the moon rise, and the darkness fall.
(Vijay Verma)
www.retiredkalam.com

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very nice
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Thank you so much.
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Beautiful post 🎸🎸
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Thank you so much, dear.
Your words mean a lot.
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Dedication!
Thank you
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Truly appreciate your kind words! 🙏✨
Dedication gives meaning to every little effort, and your encouragement makes it even more worthwhile. Thank you so much 🌸.
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This is a beautiful and poignant expression of enduring love and patient longing. The imagery of fading light and lonely rains perfectly captures the ache of separation, while the unwavering promise to reunite, even in dreams, speaks to a love that transcends all obstacles. A truly heartfelt piece.
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Your thoughtful and heartfelt appreciation truly touches me 🌹🙏.
I’m so glad the emotions and imagery resonated with you. Love, in its depth and patience, often finds expression in such tender moments, and your kind words make sharing it all the more meaningful.
Thank you sincerely for your warmth and encouragement ✨💕.
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Dear Verma Ji
The morning tea or coffee can wait, like we wait for spouse to join, but your post can’t wait. In the sense, I can’t wait to read your post.
Thank you for liking my post,’Renunion’ 🙏🌺
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Your words are so warm and thoughtful 🌸🙏.
I feel truly humbled that you look forward to my posts in such a way—it inspires me to write with even more dedication. Just as a morning tea shared with a loved one brings comfort, your kind encouragement adds sweetness to my day.
Thank you for your appreciation, and I equally enjoyed reading your beautiful post ‘Reunion’. 🌺✨
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This is relatable and beyond captivating. You describe the great depths of longing and yearning which is universal, I believe. Your words hold massive gravity as you tug at each reader’s deepest emotions tied into nostalgia.
Your gift of imagery in describing the human condition is marvelous and powerful. Thank you, dear friend, for unleashing your insights and allowing me, for one, a fresh perspective on the issues of the heart’s deepest recesses.
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Your words are truly heartwarming, my dear friend. 🙏✨
I feel humbled that the reflections touched you in such a meaningful way.
Longing, yearning, and nostalgia are indeed threads that connect us all as human beings,
and it brings me joy to know that my words could give voice to those universal emotions.
Thank you for your kind appreciation and for sharing how it resonated with you.
May we continue to explore these depths together and keep finding beauty in the language of the heart. 🌸💫
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A most beautiful and captivating poem Sir. Your descriptions are deep and profound creating vivid images one can linger on and savour. Lovely work indeed.
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Ah, finding your comment after some gap. I hope you are doing well.
Thank you so much for your generous and thoughtful words 🙏🌸.
I’m truly humbled that the poem and its imagery touched you in such a way.
Your appreciation encourages me to keep expressing feelings through words with even more depth and sincerity. 💐✨
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I am so glad to hear that Sir as I have always valued greatly your verses and look forward to more. All the best and a big, fraternal hug from your friend in Spain.
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Thank you so much, Sir,
Your words mean a lot, and I deeply cherish our connection across the miles. Sending a warm, fraternal hug back to Spain! 🌹🤝
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Always a pleasure Sir! And wishing you a peaceful and blessed day and week. All the best.
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Always a joy to hear from you, my friend! 🙏
Wishing you too a serene, fulfilling day and a week filled with blessings and cheer. 🌸✨
I hope you are doing well today.😊
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Thank you very much! I am doing very well, Sir, thank you, wishing the same for you! 🙏
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So glad to hear that! 😊
I truly appreciate your kind wishes, and I wish you continued health, happiness, and peace as well. 🙏✨
I have started a portrait drawing today after a gap of four days.😊
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Thank you so much my friend. I truly appreciate it, and always wish you the same most wonderful things. I am so glad to hear that you are starting a portrait. Starting a painting is the hardest part but the most interesting and I hope you enjoy it to its fullest extent. All the best.
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That’s so kind of you, my friend—thank you! 🙏 You’re absolutely right, beginning a portrait carries both challenge and excitement, but that’s also where the joy of discovery lies.
Your encouragement means a lot, and I’ll carry it with me as I dive into the process. Wishing you, too, endless inspiration and fulfillment in everything you do. 🌟🎨✨
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Thank you! And best of luck on the journey towards the creation of the portrait!
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You’re most welcome, Sir 🙏
I truly appreciate your kind wishes, and I’m excited to see where the portrait leads.
Every stroke feels like a step on its own journey.
Wishing you continued inspiration and joy in all that you create as well! 🌸🎨
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I am sure each brushstroke will lead you further and further into the search, which I define as the main element of art and you will become more in tune with the painting and this will allow you to know exactly when the painting is finished. Success my friend is equal to the work expended. A formula that never fails. All the best!
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That’s beautifully said, Sir. 🎨
I couldn’t agree more—the act of searching, of letting each brushstroke guide you, is what makes art alive and authentic.
Your words are an inspiration and a reminder that patience and dedication always carry us to the finish line.
Thank you for sharing such wisdom—I’ll carry it with me on this creative path. 🙏
Wishing you the same success and joy in all your endeavors! 🌟
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Thank you so much Sir. Your inspiration helps me enter the art process and begin to solve problems and I greatly appreciate it. Wishing you a marvellous and sparkling evening.
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You are most welcome, Sir. 🌟 I’m truly glad my words could inspire you on your artistic journey.
May your creativity continue to flow with ease, and wishing you too a marvellous, sparkling, and joy-filled evening. ✨🎨
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Thank you!🙏🏻 All the best!
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You’re very welcome, Sir.
Wishing you all the best as well. 🙏🏻🌸
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Well shared, sir. Thank you.
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So kind of you!
I truly value your encouraging words. 🙏🌸
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My pleasure. Blessings to you. 🙏
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Thank you so much!
Wishing you abundant blessings and a joyful time ahead. 🙏✨
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Always a pleasure. And, thank you.
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Good morning.
Have va nice day.
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A tender expression of love and yearning—the emotions flow so deeply through every line
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Thank you so much for your kind words 🙏.
I’m glad the depth of feeling came through, and your appreciation means a great deal. Emotions truly find their most natural voice when shared with an open heart. 🌹
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Here’s a short and impressive comment you can use:
**”Such a heartfelt share—those joyful tears remind us how deeply music, memories, and little moments shape our lives.”**
Would you like me to also craft a more playful version to match the lighthearted “crybaby culprits” tone?
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Absolutely! A playful version would be wonderful—it would capture the charm and humor of the “crybaby culprits” while keeping the warmth of your reflection.
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A lovely, heartfelt poem!
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I’m so glad you enjoyed it! 🌸
Your warm appreciation truly encourages me to keep writing and sharing from the heart. Thank you! 🙏✨
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