In this emotional poem, a once barren landscape undergoes a wondrous transformation, blossoming into a garden of love and joy. The haunting darkness surrenders to the embrace of light, while troubles yield to a serene peace.
Once tainted by pride and jealousy, now hearts unite in harmony under the tender moon’s glow. Yearning to return to this blissful scene, I express my hopes through solitary cries, seeking solace and understanding.
This poem serves as a reflection of the beauty of growth and our ability to capture the essence of emotions and feelings within ourselves, fostering a deeper appreciation for the art of expression.
From Barren to Bloom
In the heart of desolation, once a barren land,
Now blooms a garden, where flowers grandly stand.
Hate and anger, once entwined, did fiercely bind,
But love and joy emerged, leaving all sorrows behind.
From darkness’ grip, a radiant light did emerge,
Guiding lost souls, their path to converge.
Troubles and chaos, a tempest once near,
Now subsides to reveal a tranquil atmosphere.
Pride and jealousy, once divisive, caused despair,
Now replaced by togetherness, a bond we all share.
Beneath the moon’s shadow, hearts find their way,
Amidst the gentle waves, where emotions sway.
Who am I but a yearning soul, a writer’s plea,
Longing to return to that scene, wild and free.
A solitary scream echoes across the night,
My hope to reclaim that happiness, once in sight.
Let this poem stand as a testament of grace,
That transformation comes to every weary place.
In the realm of emotions, we find our worth,
Discovering that love can heal the scars of earth.
(Vijay Verma)
BE HAPPY….BE ACTIVE….BE FOCUSED….BE ALIVE…
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Thank you so much.
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Beautiful lines 👌
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Good afternoon.
Have a nice day.
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🙏☺️
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Stay blessed.
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Have a great day 🙏
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Thank you so much
I also wish you a very happy and productive day.
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Vijay Verma ji, I simply adore and love this poem. I read it a few times before writing this note.
I wanted to take a moment to express my profound appreciation for this poem, “From Barren to Bloom.” Your words resonated deeply within, creating an array of emotions that lingered long after the last line. I could not help but put in this note.
The imagery you crafted in depicting the transformation from desolation to a vibrant garden was truly captivating. Your ability to breathe life into verses, turning a barren land into a metaphorical Eden, was nothing short of magical. I seemed to be present there on the green spot. Each line seemed to blossom with hope, and by the end, one could almost feel the fragrance of the flowers you painted with your words.
The contrast between hate and anger, and the emergence of love and joy, was a powerful narrative that beautifully unfolded. Your verses became a testament to the resilience of the human spirit and its strong capacity to transcend adversities.
The themes of togetherness and the bonding of hearts beneath the moon’s shadow were particularly moving.
Moreover, the poem’s introspective touch, where you portrayed yourself as a yearning soul, added a personal layer that invited readers to reflect on their own journeys. The solitary scream echoing across the night created a poignant image, capturing the universal longing to reclaim through recollection moments of happiness that once graced our lives.
In the world of emotions, your poem stood as a beacon of grace, reminding us all that transformation is not just a possibility but needs to be an inevitable part of the human experience. Your verses carried a profound message of healing through love, emphasizing the resilience of the human heart in the face of life’s scars.
Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece. Your poetic prowess has left an indelible mark, and I look forward to experiencing more of your poetic creations in the future.
Pranam!
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Dear Sir
Your heartfelt appreciation of my poem, fills me with immense gratitude and joy. It warms my heart to know that my words could touch you in such a profound way.
Thank you once again for your kind words and encouragement. Your support means the world to me. I am grateful for the opportunity to share my poetic journey with you, and I eagerly anticipate the chance to connect with you through more of my poetic creations in the future.
With heartfelt regards,
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The pleasure was mine and eagerly look forward to more from you. Thanks
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Thank you once again for your kind words and for taking the time to reach out. Your appreciation serves as a source of inspiration for me to continue exploring the depths of my creativity.
I sincerely hope that my future works continue to resonate with you and touch your heart.
In fact, I am learning many things from your Blog and the way you express emotions.
You have a deeper understanding of the human experience and the beauty that lies within it.
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Thanks sir. I am in awe of your using the tech. Using AI. You are an encouragement for seniors like me who are stumbling to get hold of the new tech. I am trying and seeing your posts gives the confidence that it is doable.
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Thank you for your kind words.
I am truly humbled to know that my use of technology and AI serves as an encouragement.
Your willingness to adapt and learn new technological advancements is a testament to your resilience and open-mindedness.
Learning this technology is a step closer to unlocking its endless possibilities
and more importantly, it is helpful to enjoy a retired life like me..
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Yes sir, you hit the bulls eye when you said it’s helpful to enjoy retired life. 👌👍🙌🙌🙏
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Yes, Sir, Retirement is indeed a special phase of life that offers the chance
to explore new avenues, pursue passions, and savor the moments that truly matter.
We should utilize this time with an open mind and a sense of curiosity that can lead to
fulfilling experiences and a deeper appreciation of life’s simple joys.
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“transformation comes to every weary place” what a lovely line. ❤️
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Absolutely correct.
This is a profound reminder that even in the midst of challenges, there’s potential for renewal and growth.
It beautifully encapsulates the resilience of the human spirit and the promise of brighter days ahead.
Thank you so much for sharing your feelings.
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