
This poem expresses the gentle pain of a love remembered, still alive in the heart. It shows how moments fade, but feelings stay—how distance can’t erase the influence on our soul.
Through soft echoes, laughter, and unspoken words, the poem reminds us that some connections stay strong, even when time separates them.
# You’re Not Far Away #
A smile once hidden, soft and bright,
Now dances gently in the dark night.
Hands that reached but couldn’t stay
Still whisper softly, “You’re not far away.”
Words left unspoken, dreams untold,
Moments vanished, yet I hold.
The wind brings echoes through the day,
A quiet murmur, “You’re not far away.”
The laughter shared, the tears we knew,
Paint the skies in tender hues.
Though time has stolen some display,
It softly hums, “You’re not far away.”
Shadows fade, and nights grow long,
Yet memories linger, sweet and strong.
Through every dawn, in every gray,
Your voice reminds me, “You’re not far away.”
So I’ll smile through the passing years,
Treasure the joy, embrace the tears.
The time we lost can’t come again—
Yet love still whispers, “You’re not far away.”
(Vijay Verma)
www.retiredkalam.com

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Bahut sunder 🌹❤️
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Thank you so much, dear.
Your words mean a lot.
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Verma ji, what a profoundly moving and beautifully crafted poem. You have captured the very essence of love’s gentle, enduring presence with such delicate grace. The recurring whisper, ‘You’re not far away,’ is not just a line—it’s a soothing balm for anyone who has ever loved and remembered. The imagery of dancing smiles in the dark, echoes in the wind, and skies painted in tender hues is simply exquisite. It truly reminds us that true connection transcends both time and distance, living on in the quiet corners of the heart. Thank you for sharing this piece of your soul; it resonates deeply. 🙏🤝
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Thank you so much for your heartfelt and generous words.
It truly means more than I can express.
I’m grateful that the emotions behind the poem reached you in the same spirit in which they were written—quiet, gentle, and born from a place of remembrance and connection. Your thoughtful reflection adds another layer of beauty to the piece, and I deeply appreciate the time you took to feel it so fully.
Your kindness, sensitivity, and warmth shine through every word.
Thank you once again for such an uplifting and soulful response. 🙏
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much,
Your words mean a lot.
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Those that have passed away in my life, You are not far away is how I feel. I feel they are watching over me…with God’s help.
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That’s such a comforting way to hold their memory — close enough to feel, even if unseen. When love is that deep, it doesn’t vanish; it just shifts into a quieter kind of presence. And yeah, with God in the mix, that sense of being watched over can feel steady and real.
It’s a gentle kind of peace, knowing they’re still part of your path.
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How romantic and beautiful!
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Thank you so much! I’m glad the poem resonated with you and that you found it romantic and beautiful. Your appreciation means a lot! 🌸✨
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Lovely poem
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Thank you so much! I’m truly glad the poem resonated with you. Your appreciation means a lot and encourages me to keep writing. 😊✨
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very nice .
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Thank you so much.
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So beautiful and with such tenderness and finesse that you have ended this lovely poem.
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Thank you so much for such a kind and thoughtful appreciation.
Your words truly mean a lot. I’m glad the poem’s ending resonated with you in that gentle way. 💫
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Truly a most beautiful poem Sir and it is a pleasure to read it as it is to read all your posts. All the best and my wishes for a beautiful and creative day.
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Thank you, Sir.
That’s incredibly kind of you to say. It really means a lot. I’m glad the words spoke to you, and I’m even happier to know you’re enjoying the posts as a whole.
Wishing you a day filled with calm moments, bright sparks of inspiration, and whatever beauty your spirit needs today. 🌿✨
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Thank you so very much Sir! And the very best to you as well. Enjoy a beautiful evening!
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Thank you, Sir.
Wishing you a wonderfully peaceful evening too — may it be cozy, calm, and just the right kind of beautiful. 😊🌙
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Thank you kindly Sir, you too, may you enjoy a peaceful and restful night. Sweet dreams Sir and I will catch you in the morning!
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Good evening, Sir.
have a restful night.
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Good morning Sir! Have a grand day filled with peace, happiness and tranquility and may you create beautiful things!
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Good morning Sir! Have a grand day filled with peace, happiness and tranquility and may you create beautiful things!
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Thank you! May your afternoon and evening be blessed with peace and your choice of happy events! And victory in TT, should you be playing today! 😊👍😊
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Ahh, thank you — that’s such a warm little bundle of good wishes, and I’m happily taking every bit of it!
May your own afternoon drift in gently, full of ease, good moments, and whatever tiny joys make you smile without thinking.
And yes, ready for playing TT.
I hope the victory finds you just as easily. 😊🏓✨
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I hope you won your matches Sir! And a great evening and night to you!
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Thank you, Sir.
Yes, I have won 3 but lost 3 as well.
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Always remember the victories, and grow and learn from the defeats, sweet dreams Sir, catch you in the morning.
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Good morning, Sir.
I am on morning walk track.
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Good morning! Have a wonderful walk Sir and a happy and creative day!
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Good morning, Sir.
Thank you so much—wishing you a beautiful day as well, filled with calm steps, fresh thoughts, and creative moments. 🌿
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Thank you so much Sir! Yes, thankful for a new day to challenge myself to create and to dream further. Enjoy the weekend Sir!
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You’re very welcome! That’s a wonderful way to step into a new day—open, grateful, and ready to create.
Wishing you a relaxing, inspiring weekend filled with fresh ideas and gentle moments. Enjoy it fully, Sir.
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Wise words indeed—victories to cherish, lessons to carry forward.
Thank you, and sweet dreams to you as well. Catch you in the morning. 🌙✨
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So Beautiful.
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Thank you so much,
Your words mean a lot.
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You’re most welcome.
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Thanks again.
Stay connected and keep sharing.
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This is a very beautiful poem, Vermavkv.
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That’s wonderful to hear—there’s something quietly magical about morning walks, isn’t there? I’m glad the answer resonated with you.
Wishing you many more peaceful steps and beautiful mornings ahead.
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Monday. http://catholiccritique.com/?p=27963
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Ah. Its likely because it’s in the “scheduled” bin. Both the mediation on your dear mother and the poem. One post.
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Ah, that makes sense—thank you for clarifying.
I appreciate you letting me know. Whenever it surfaces, it will be there at just the right time.
I’m grateful you took the time to notice and share that with me 🌿
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