
A simple, thoughtful poem about change and the passage of time. The image of a moved bench and an old tree shows how places can change while our feelings for them remain the same.
It encourages us to value moments while we have them.
# Shadows of Passing Time #
Where the bench once rested,
now only emptiness remains,
a quiet echo of laughter,
A silent space, of fleeting rains.
It sits elsewhere now,
another place, another view,
but does its heart remember
the moments it once knew?
The tree that cast its shadow,
branches proud, reaching high,
once a refuge for birds above,
a soft embrace for wandering eyes.
Roots clawed deep into the earth,
searching for strength to hold,
yet even the oldest giants
must one day grow old.
Time moves like a gentle thief,
carrying what we cannot keep,
and still, in silent memory,
we treasure what runs deep.
Pause, then, while you can,
and see what’s here today—
for beauty blooms and fades,
Yet in our hearts, it stays.
(Vijay Verma)
www.retiredkalam.com

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Verma ji, your poem nails that quiet sadness of change with the bench and old tree, reminding us to soak up the now cause those moments stick in our hearts forever—love it!
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Thank you so much for saying that — your words mean more than you know. 🌿
If the poem touched even a small corner of that shared human feeling we all carry — the tenderness of change,
the ache of what used to be, and the gratitude for what remains — then I’m grateful.
Moments fade, but the way they live inside us stays whole.
And hearing that it resonated with you makes the writing feel completely worthwhile. 🙏✨
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very nice .
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Thank you so much.
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Love the comment about the oldest giants and pausing in the moment is crucial.
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Thank you so much — I’m really glad that part spoke to you.
There’s something powerful about remembering how the oldest giants—whether trees, mountains,
or memories—teach us to pause, breathe, and simply be for a moment.
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much!
I’m glad the poem resonated with you. 🌸📖
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Vermavkvさん、おはようございます。いつも有難うございます🙇♂️
「最も古い巨人でさえいつかは年を取
らなければならない」「美しさは花開き、そして消えていく それでも心の中には残る」素敵な詩を有難うございます。感動的な詩です😆
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Good morning! Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful words 🙏.
I’m truly glad the poem resonated with you. It means a lot to know that the imagery of time, beauty, and memory touched your heart.
Your appreciation is very encouraging!
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Thank you so much, my friend — that means a lot. 😊
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Thanks friend
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You are welcome, dear.
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