A powerful declaration of resilience and unwavering faith, this poem celebrates the human spirit’s ability to rise above challenges.
It reminds us that no obstacle—no matter how daunting—can diminish the courage, hope, and determination within.
Who says I am tired?
In every pause, I carve a new horizon.
Even in fallen leaves, I find the green,
And with the lamp of hope, I read my fate.
If roads are blocked, I forge my path,
If they call it the end, I hum a beginning.
From every blow, I find a new note,
Who says I am tired?
Do not try to stop my steps,
I have the strength to face storms head-on.
Those who cannot feel the rhythm of my stride
Will find no meaning in my battle song.
Who says I am tired?
I have moved beyond my path,
And now I walk life’s roads unafraid,
Even standing face-to-face with death,
I rise victorious, I rise with faith.
(Vijay Verma)
www.retiredkalam.com
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very nice .
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Thank you so much.
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This is absolutely breathtaking. It’s more than a poem; it’s a battle cry for the soul. The defiant, recurring question “Who says I am tired?” doesn’t just challenge an external critic, it silences the inner voice of doubt. There is such powerful alchemy here—turning fallen leaves into green, blows into notes, and ends into beginnings. It speaks of a spirit that has been tested, has known struggle, and has chosen to metabolize it all into strength and faith.
The final stanza is particularly moving. To “walk life’s roads unafraid” is one thing, but to stand “face-to-face with death” and still rise victorious and faithful—that is the ultimate testament to an unbreakable human spirit.
Thank you for sharing this profound and inspiring piece. It feels like a lamp of hope held out for anyone who needs to remember their own innate power. It will resonate deeply with all who find it.
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Your words mean so much—thank you for reading with such depth and heart. I’m truly touched by how you captured the essence of the poem.
Yes, it was born from moments of exhaustion and quiet defiance, where hope had to be reclaimed rather than found. Knowing it reached you in that way makes every line worth writing. I’m grateful it spoke to your spirit as it did to mine.
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This really hit me. There’s so much quiet strength in your words—it doesn’t feel forced, just real. I love how you turn struggle into movement and how hope keeps flickering through every line. It’s the kind of piece that makes you pause and remember what resilience actually looks like. Beautifully written.
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful words. 🌿
I’m truly touched that the piece resonated with you in that way. It means a lot to know that the emotions and quiet strength came through. Hope and resilience are fragile things, but they keep us moving — I’m grateful you felt that connection. 💫
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A powerful declaration of resilience and unwavering faith, this poem celebrates the human spirit’s ability to rise above challenges. It reminds us that no obstacle—no matter how daunting—can diminish the courage, hope, and determination within.
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Thank you so much for your kind words! 🌟
I truly believe that resilience is born not in comfort, but in moments of struggle. When we refuse to give up—when we choose faith over fear—we discover a strength we never knew we had.
I’m glad this poem resonated with you and carried that spirit of hope forward.
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Ah Said the Same in my Profile .. bluesocial .. im retired but Not tired ..
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That’s a wonderful mantra .❤️
“Retired but not tired” perfectly captures the spirit of living fully, embracing each day with energy and purpose, no matter the stage of life.
It’s inspiring to see someone celebrate life with such vigor and positivity!
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A wonderful anthem of moving forward with life 🙂
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Thank you so much! 😊
I’m really glad you felt that sense of moving forward — that was exactly the spirit I hoped to capture.
Life keeps teaching us to keep going, one step, one breath, one hope at a time. 🌿✨
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