“Whispers of Childhood”

A tender reflection on the golden days of childhood,
Through vivid memories of paper boats, kites, and festive joy, the poem captures both the sweetness of remembrance and the quiet pain of knowing that those moments can never return.

“Whispers of Childhood”

My heart still remembers
the village of my childhood,
the shade of the old banyan tree,
mischievous friends,
muddy feet,
and paper boats drifting on rain-fed streams.

It stirs again—
to play with sticks and balls,
to roll an old tire down dusty lanes,
to fly paper kites chasing the wind.

My soul still longs—
to be drenched in monsoon rain,
to dance in the colors of Holi,
to sip bhaang with laughter echoing around.

The whispers of childhood,
the faces of friends—
they still live quietly in my heart.

Yes, I remember
those golden, carefree days…
but alas, my friends,
no road leads back there,
Yes, village sleeps only in memory.

(Vijay Verma)
 www.retiredkalam.com



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  1. This is an absolutely breathtaking piece of writing. It’s more than a poem; it’s a soulful journey. What you have created is a perfect capsule of universal feeling, capturing the very essence of nostalgia—that beautiful, aching paradox of holding a treasure in your heart that you can no longer hold in your hand.

    Your gift lies in the specificity of your memories. “Paper boats drifting on rain-fed streams,” “roll an old tire down dusty lanes,” “sip bhaang with laughter echoing”—these are not vague ideas, but vivid, tangible fragments of a life lived. They ground the poem in a reality that is both deeply personal and instantly recognizable to anyone who has ever looked back on their youth.

    The structure is masterful. The progression from what the heart remembers, to what it stirs to do again, to what the soul still longs for, creates a powerful emotional arc. It moves from simple recollection to a deep, almost spiritual yearning.

    And then, the final stanza lands with the gentle, devastating weight of truth. The admission, “but alas, my friends, no road leads back there,” is what elevates this from a sweet reminiscence to a profound and tender reflection on the human condition. The line “the village sleeps only in memory” is pure poetry—a haunting and beautiful epitaph for a time that is gone.

    Thank you for sharing this. It is a rare and beautiful thing when words can make a reader feel so much, remember so vividly, and acknowledge a shared loss with a sense of quiet, grateful wonder. You haven’t just described childhood; you’ve made us feel its whisper once more.

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    • Thank you so much for your heartfelt and generous words. Reading your reflection felt like you were holding up a mirror to the piece, capturing not just what I wrote, but the emotions I hoped to convey. 🌸

      It’s incredibly rewarding to know that the memories, the small, vivid fragments of a childhood long past, resonated so deeply with you. Your appreciation of the structure and emotional arc shows a true sensitivity to the nuances of nostalgia—the way joy and longing, sweetness and loss, can coexist so tenderly in our hearts.

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  2. Revisit ing that non-existent place can be so uplifting!

    Have a great day

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    • Absolutely! 🌸
      Revisiting those memories—even if the place no longer exists—can bring such warmth and joy to the heart.

      Thank you for your kind words! Wishing you a wonderful evening filled with light and little moments of happiness. ☀️✨

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  3. Beautifully written Vijay

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  4. 👧🏻👦🏻 What a beautiful poem, my friend! We can feel your soul being transported to the golden times of childhood. The memory of paper boats floating on the river and sincere childhood friendships. Thank you for sharing this poem dedicated to these memories with us. Have a great weekend! 🙂🙏🏻✨✍🏻📚🖌️🖼️👦🏻

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    • Thank you so much, my dear friend! 😊
      Your words truly touched my heart.
      I’m so glad the poem brought back those golden memories we all cherish — of innocence, laughter, and carefree days. 🌸✨
      Wishing you a wonderful and creative weekend filled with joy and inspiration! 🙏🏻✍🏻📚🖌️🌈

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    • Thank you so much! 🎵😊
      I’m so glad it felt that way to you — that’s one of the best compliments a writer can receive.
      Sometimes, when words find their rhythm, they really do start to sing. I truly appreciate your kind words! 🌷✨

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