# Whispers in the Rain#

This heartfelt love poem compares the rain to the beloved’s presence—calming, nurturing, and deeply missed.
It captures the longing for reunion and the comfort found in cherished memories during a monsoon.

Whispers in the Rain

Today’s rain feels like touching you,
calming my soul, feeling love as true.
Each drop whispers your tender name,
stirring love’s waves, like a gentle flame.

This rainfall drowns me in memories sweet,
your eyes, your voice, as our hearts meet.
The drizzle hums your words so near,
heavy rain wraps me, like you’re here.

Without you, this rain feels incomplete,
like starless nights, cold and discreet.
Your love hides in these clouded skies,
pulling me close through your tearful eyes.

These clouds, this rain, they carry your trace,
your warmth, your touch, your soft embrace.
Each moment drenched in thoughts of you
brings joy and hope as a world made new.

With every storm, my heart beats fast,
yet your love remains, forever to last.
This rain will fade, but you will stay,
the hope that guides me every day.

(Vijay Verma)
 www.retiredkalam.com



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22 replies

  1. Such a beautiful poem—like rain itself, it feels tender, soothing, and full of love.

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    • Thank you so much for your lovely words! 🌧️💖
      I’m truly touched that you felt the same calm and tenderness I hoped to convey — like rain, gently washing over the heart.
      Your appreciation means a lot! 🙏✨

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  2. Beautiful post! Love the description of feelings that we all have for at least one person .

    Thank you

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    • Thank you so much for your kind words! 💖
      I’m glad the post resonated with you — it’s true, we all have that one special person who leaves a lasting imprint on our hearts.
      Your appreciation truly means a lot! 🌷✨

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  3. A beautifully tender poem. You’ve woven the monsoon rain and the ache of longing together perfectly, creating a sense of both comfort and melancholy. The imagery is vivid and the emotion feels deeply genuine.

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    • Thank you so much for your beautiful words and sensitive reading. 🌧️💙

      I’m truly touched that the emotions and imagery resonated with you. The monsoon has always held a special place in my heart—a blend of nostalgia, renewal, and quiet yearning.

      Your appreciation means a lot and encourages me to keep writing from that space of feeling and reflection. 🙏✨

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  4. very nice .

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  5. This is a sweet poem, Vijay. I appreciate the use of rain in connecting with a loved one who has passed.

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    • Thank you so much for your kind words. 🌧️
      Your understanding truly touches my heart.
      The rain often feels like a gentle bridge between memories and the present—a quiet reminder
      that love never really leaves us. 💫

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  6. Hold on!! That painting is beautiful Verma!! I love the colors; so bright and lovely. Wonderful poem Verma ❤️. You made me love the rain with your passionate words, thoughtful descriptions, and your strong use of imagery.

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    • Thank you so much for your beautiful words! 🌧️🎨
      I’m truly touched that the painting and poem spoke to you that way.
      The rain has always inspired me—it carries both calm and passion within its rhythm.
      I’m so glad you felt that connection too. ❤️

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