# Moonlit Promises #

Some moments in life speak without words—when the heart listens, the soul understands.

Moonlit Promises captures one such moment, where love unfolds gently under the quiet watch of the moon, and two souls walk together along the shore, bound not just by hands, but by destiny.

Moonlit Promises

Beneath the moon’s tender, silver light,
Two shadows merge in the velvet night,
Hand in hand, where soft waves meet,
They walk to the rhythm of hearts that beat.

The sea hums low its timeless song,
Whispering dreams they’ve carried along,
Each step a vow, each glance a thread,
Weaving the future where love is led.

The water mirrors their silent grace,
The stars lean closer to watch and trace,
No words are needed, the night just knows,
How love, like the ocean, quietly grows.

And there, beneath the moon’s embrace,
They find eternity in this fleeting place,
Two souls, one journey, forever tied—
Walking as one by the whispering tide.
(Vijay Verma)



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6 replies

  1. This is a beautifully crafted poem that captures the **quiet intimacy and timeless quality of love.** “A luminous tapestry woven with moonlight and ocean whispers, capturing love’s silent, profound unity and its echo of eternity in a single, perfect moment.” Beautiful poem Verma ji 🌷🤝

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    • Thank you so much for your kind and thoughtful words 🌸🙏. Your description adds another layer of beauty to my poem — “moonlight and ocean whispers” truly reflect the depth I wished to convey. I feel humbled that the essence of love’s quiet strength and timeless bond touched your heart.

      Grateful for your encouragement, it inspires me to keep writing with even more passion 🌷✨.

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  2. Thank you so much for your kind words 🌸🙏.
    I’m delighted you enjoyed both the verse and the painting — they are two different expressions of the same feeling.

    Your appreciation truly encourages me to keep creating with heart and soul 🎨✍️✨.

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  3. very nice .

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