
This poem shows the sadness of lost innocence. By comparing a young leaf taken from its tree, it questions the cruelty of the world and laments lives that never grow fully.
It reflects a soft sadness for hope, kindness, and unachieved dreams.
“The Fallen Leaf”
Today, a young leaf fell in silence,
Still breathing green, still full of hope.
It was not dry, not tired of living,
It had just begun to cope.
The world did not wait for its laughter,
Did not care for its fragile heart.
It wanted to play, to wander, to wonder,
But cruelty tore its dreams apart.
Why is the world so hungry for pain?
Why does it steal before life grows?
Why was the leaf left to wither slowly,
Why leave her in unbearable throes?
The wind whispers, the shadows sigh,
And tears fall from the lonely sky.
But even fallen, though unseen,
She leaves a trace of what has been.
(Vijay Verma)
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“Why is the world so hungry for pain?” I often ask myself this question.
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Thank you. I think the world isn’t so much hungry for pain as it is unsure how else to make sense of itself. Pain is loud, undeniable, and shared across every life, so people return to it when they’re searching for meaning. But poems like this remind us that asking the question is already an act of hope—that beneath the noise, we’re still looking for understanding, healing, and something gentler to hold onto.
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That is an original unexpected metaphor, with dark undertones
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Thank you—I’m glad it resonated. I was drawn to that metaphor because darkness often reveals truths we avoid in brighter language. If it lingers a little uncomfortably, I think that’s where its honesty lives.
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very nice .
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Thank you so much.
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まだ若い葉なのに、、まだ緑の呼吸をし、希望に満ちていた葉なのに、それが静かに落ちてしまった。
乾いてはいなかったし、生きることに疲れてはいなかったように見える葉がです😫
叶わぬ夢に悲しみをみせるものです。この言葉一つ一つに惹かれるものがあります。長い人生の中でも、そんなことがあります。そんな人生の一コマを想起させるような詩です。素晴らしい詩を共有してくれてありがとうございます😉
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Thank you so much for such a deeply felt and thoughtful response.
Your reflection beautifully captures the quiet sadness and tenderness in the image of the leaf—still green, still breathing with hope, yet falling too soon. Life does offer moments like this, where loss arrives without warning or visible reason, and your words honor that truth with great sensitivity.
I’m truly grateful that the poem resonated with you and evoked such a vivid moment from the long journey of life. Thank you for reading it so closely and for sharing your insight.
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Beauutiful
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Thank you so much for your appreciation.
Stay connected and keep sharing.❤️
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A poignant and haunting reflection—your poem tenderly captures the grief of lost innocence and the quiet cruelty of lives cut short.
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Thank you deeply for your thoughtful and sensitive response.
I’m grateful that the poem resonated with you and that its emotions came through so clearly.
If it invites even a moment of remembrance or reflection, then it has done what it was meant to do.
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You offer much to think about in this piece, Vijay. Beautiful.
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Thank you so much. I’m really glad the piece gave you something to reflect on.
Your words mean a lot to me, and I truly appreciate you taking the time to read and share your thoughts.
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Beautiful and poignant!
all the best for the year ahead,
from Linda x
⭐
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Thank you so much, Linda.
Your kind words mean a great deal to me.
I truly appreciate your good wishes for the year ahead. Warm regards to you. 🌸
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