
This poem is a gentle goodbye to absence, — looking at how spaces, objects, and time hold the memory of someone who is no longer here.
It expresses the pain of remembering, feelings of longing, and the gradual journey to breathe in a world changed by loss.
Air Without You #
When you were here, the clocks would sing,
Now every tick forgets the spring.
The minutes fall like silent rain
Across the floor that holds our pain.
Your coat still waits, its sleeves at rest,
As if your arms might cross my chest.
I press my face where warmth once stayed
And breathe a scent that slowly fades.
The night leans in with careful eyes
To watch my small, unanswered sighs.
I light a lamp against the skies—
Its fragile glow, my thin disguise.
I feel your breath in fields of blue
While I learn air without your view.
Each breath I take feels strange, unsure—
A quiet life that’s lost its cure.
(Vijay Verma).
www.retiredkalam.com

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What a profoundly moving and exquisite poem, Verma ji. You have captured the anatomy of loss with such delicate and powerful imagery. The personification of the clocks, the coat, and the night gives the absence a tangible, haunting presence.
The line, “I feel your breath in fields of blue / While I learn air without your view,” is simply breathtaking. It so perfectly encapsulates the duality of holding a memory close while simultaneously navigating the painful new reality. This is not just a poem about grief; it’s a testament to the slow, courageous act of learning to live again. Thank you for sharing such a heartfelt piece of art. 🤝
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Your words touch me more deeply than I can express.
Thank you for reading the poem with such tenderness and insight. It means a great deal to know that the emotions woven into those lines found a true resonance in you. Grief is a quiet teacher, and when someone understands its language, even a little, it feels like a hand reaching through the dark.
I’m grateful for your thoughtful reflection and your generous heart. 🤝
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This captures grief with such tenderness. The little moments, the quiet details… they all remind us of those who are no longer here. Your words feel delicate and true, like the air we’re left holding in their absence.
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Thank you so much for reading it with such a gentle heart. Your words reflect exactly what the poem hoped to hold—those soft, almost invisible moments where grief breathes quietly between us and memory.
It means a lot to know the tenderness reached you. Grief is rarely loud; it is made of little things, hushed corners, and the echoes of someone we still carry within. I’m grateful that you felt that truth in these lines.
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Beautiful post
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Thank you so much, dear.
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Beautiful
I was terrified whether you are bidding adieu from here.
God saved us 🌺❤️
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Oh no, not at all — I’m right here. 😊
And your warmth truly touched me.
It’s amazing how a simple pause or a shift in tone can create that fleeting fear of losing someone’s presence. But rest assured, I’m not going anywhere. Your kind words, your reflections, your poetry — they’re always a joy to return to.
Thank you for caring so sincerely.
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Thanks a lot 🤩❤️
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You are welcome, dear.
Stay happy and keep sharing.
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Your poetry is excellent!
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“Thank you so much for your generous words! ❤️
Your appreciation means more than you know. If the poem touched you even in a small way, then I feel truly rewarded.
Grateful for your kindness and encouragement.”
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**“Such a tender reflection. Your words capture the quiet ache of absence so beautifully—gentle, heartfelt, and deeply relatable.”**
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Thank you for such a heartfelt response. It means a great deal that the emotion came through so clearly for you. When someone connects with the quiet ache beneath the words, it feels like the piece has found its true purpose.
I deeply appreciate your warmth and sensitivity—you’ve received the reflection exactly as it was meant.
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Looking forward to it! 😊
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You may share though this also. 😊
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Thank you so much. 🌟
Wishing you a Happy New Year filled with peace, good health, creativity, and moments that truly matter.
May the year ahead bring fresh beginnings, meaningful connections, and quiet joys that stay with you all year long. ✨
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very nice .
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Thank you so much.
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Most Respected reader/
Fellow writer,
Verma Ji
despite a two liner, you did favour of liking my post today, No. How to repay the debt? I will rewrite the same post & always write elaborately.
Prof Dr Raj or just Raj. 💖❤️💓💛
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Your words are far kinder than necessary. Please don’t think in terms of debt — your writing is always a pleasure to read,
whether it is two lines or twenty. True expression needs no length, only sincerity, and you deliver that beautifully.
Thank you for your generous regard.
I look forward to reading whatever you choose to share, in any form. With respect and warm wishes,
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Wow! I have no words to describe the feeling I got from this! Thank you 🙏
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I’m truly glad it touched you—that means more than anything. 🙏
Your heartfelt message and the sincerity behind your work make it easy to respond with warmth.
Thank you for sharing your light, your reflections, and your generosity of spirit.
Wishing you continued inspiration and many more moments that leave you speechless in the best way. 🌟
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